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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40868
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;如果增加些复杂句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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Nowadays,many a people makes a conclusion without thinking carefully.Whatever they hear or view, they will trust it soon.Neverthless, it can't be denied that making a conclusion without thinking carefully is unwise. Actually, a lot of things we know are distinguished about what they really are.Therefore, when we heard something or viewed something, we are supposed to judge if it is true. And then we can make conclusions. So unwise is judging unthoughtfully that we'd better stop it as soon as we can.Besides, there is no one but longs to be respected.While you are judging something unthoughtfully, you won't be respected.So,it is high time we corrected our shortcomings, including judging unthoughtfully.

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