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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2275
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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评语:

文章词汇表达做的很好,但单词拼写要认真;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

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These days, it seem that art plays a indispensable role in publc life. While some still hold conservative view that providing artists with financial support is a kind of waste, in stead of which money should be given to more important areas. It is my personal belief that artists deserve to have financial support from the government, because of the following reasons. First of all, art is a sort of necessity for people's inner world. There is no doubt that researches on sides like technology, education, health care and social service can bring benefits to the public living standard; however, as a marvellours spirit food, art also need to be paid attention to. As the society developing more and more fast, simply satifying physical requirments is not yet enough to modern people. They prefer to enjoying a graceful concert or an interesting movie after dinner rather than staying indoors, spending time with a computer. Overall, it is completely necessary to support not only the so-called impertant aspects but also spiritual edification - art. secondly, I would like to emphasise more details about significances of art for why the government worthes to enrich art area. Since being nourishment for the mind, art makes a bridge between intercountries and internal country. With its own unique characteristics, just as culture, art is a way of communication between the public. People can enjoy local art, meanwhile to gain knowledge of international masterpieces. Addimittedly, art provides multiple visual angles for people to understand the whole world. The more you have experienced, the more creative inspiration you may possibly get, which is another route to improve innovation ability. In summary, I once again reaffirm my position that both physical field and spiritual side are necessary to a person. Thus, in order to accomplish a much more dynamic society, government is supposed to invest not only social infrastructure but also art.

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