2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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dear friend, i am glad to invite you tovisit my hometown.as you know,i was born in yueqing,a small town in wenzhou city,zhejiang province. there are many wellknown sights,such as yandang mountain. it sits in a ancient town ,and it is famous for various shapes of mountain as well as long ,splendid stream. i would like to accompany you to go fishing .