新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

把握下长难句在文中的分布；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Dear David: I am pleasure to hear that you will come to lanzhou to learn Chinese.It's my hornor to share the ways about Chinese learning with you.As you know Chinese is hard to learn,the same word or sentence may have absoultely diffrient meanings.I advise you to scan some Chinese websites everyday read news in Chinese,then you can watch some chinese movies to improve your listening.If you want to improve your Chinese speaking you had better find a patterner speak with you in Chinese.I would like do my best to help you! Yours: Li quan