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2010年12月英语六级作文真题:高校评级

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:44浏览次数:1207[网页划词已开启]
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题目 My View on University Ranking
要求
1.现在有很多高校评级
2.人们对此看法各异
3.你认为
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用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Along with the development of education, university ranking has witnessed becoming increasingly popular. As to the phenomenon, people’s opinion vary from person to person. On the one hand, many people assert that the university ranking impact deeeply on the graduate of college. They think if we graduate form a advanced university, we will be easy to get a job after graduating. On the other hand, some people hold different point. They claim that if we work hard in the university, we can find a good job whatever we don’t graduate from the advanced university. When it comes to job interview, many people assert the advanced university ranking is the key to get a job. As far as I am concerned, I disagree this point. Otherwise, I firmly applaud the second point. It is successful that we work hard in the university no matter we study in the low-ranking university. Only we insist to study can we be the best.

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