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Along with the development of education, university ranking has witnessed becoming increasingly popular. As to the phenomenon, people’s opinions vary from person to person. On the one hand, many people assert that the university ranking impact deeply on the graduate . They think if they graduate form an advanced university, they will be easy to get a job after graduating. On the other hand, some people hold a different point. They claim that if we work hard in the university, we can find a good job whatever we don’t graduate from the advanced university. When it comes to job interview, many people assert the advanced university ranking is the key to get a job. As far as I am concerned, I don't agree with it. Otherwise, I firmly applaud the second point. It is successful that we work hard in the university no matter we study in the low-ranking university. Only we study hard can we be the best.
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