高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My Home In the past,my hometown was a beautiful place.There was a fresh river and fish were happy in the river.Many houses were crowded,the roads were narrow.Most of people lived a hard life. At the present,many buildings have built,and our houses become taller and brighter.Many people have had car.But because of the development of industry,trees and fish become smaller and smaller.So,it is necessary for us to take measures against pulltion