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Nowadays, online shopping is becoming more and more popular in the world. Actually, I always buy goods from online such as Taobao, Jingdong, Sasa etc. I think online shopping is very convenient, following is our opinions: 1, goods in the online shop is vary, even you can find all you want from the online, such as clothes, dress, food, daily necessities etc. 2. generally, many work people do not have much time to go shopping, or working is so tired, so they do not want to go shopping, but something is short at present, so they just can open the online shop link, then search what they want from the online shop, buy it, then just need waiting for the express at home. So easy. 3. same thing with the products in the physical store, but price in the online shop is much cheaper, as long as you buy the goods from the standard brand online shop. Then do not dare the quality. All in all, I like buy goods from online shop, because the price is cheap, express is quick, service is not bad, what's more, it is so convenient for me because my rest time is short. Thank you.