高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；复杂句的使用不是很丰富；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

The trees around my hometown ,the river is blue and clear .The house is poor ,the street is short.Many people lave them hometown to work to other city,because they wants give they family get many money . Everything has changed ,now many tall building around city stores all over .With the development of technology cars all over the road and lane。But trees was cut down,fish has gone!People should protect the environment from bad man damage . One world one love,therefore make pollution .