新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

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I agree with the statement that games are as important for adults as they are for children.one the one hand,in modern society,people would have various of presures that from job,from family,from other people and so on,games could channel these presures as to adults.on the other hand,games could widen our horizon and help us get new skills as well,for example,I-go as a kind of game could help us improve our memory and enhance our caculate skills.a lot of game can improve old people's memory.