托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；句式变化多样；作者词汇表达灵活性稍有欠缺，请重视拼写检查；请注意分段。

For me,snap judgments can never be trusted.here are the reasons:without sufficient primary informations about the facts,snap judgments can not be able to correct.for example:a teacher find that an elder student talk loudly to a younger student,The teacher might get a conculsion that the elder student are not polite,but in fact,the younger student steal the older student's pen and being found by the elder student.so the elder student is tought him to behave himself the next time.so,without sufficient information,snap judgments can never be trusted.there are another example:a man had been found in a woman's house dead.and the woman hold a knife in her hand,the fact is that the man intend to kill the woman to get money in this house,but the woman discovered him and the man plan to kill the woman,and the woman kill the man in struggle to manage to survive.if the police jumped to a snap judgments,the woman would be most likely to be punished by law unjustly.