2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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the most attractive place in qingdao is that the beautiful sea ,so i strongly suggest you to see the sea.the reason why is that you can drink bear as you are in the beach ,you can relax yourself.in addition ,there are many charming girls ,maybe you can meet your mr.right .besides, there must be cold in sea in summer. in the night ,you can enjoy the performence in the beach ,you can also dance with the actor .