文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;全文结构较为严谨;能够使用一些简单的从句;请注意分段。
The most attractive place in qingdao is that the beautiful sea ,So I strongly suggest you to see the sea.The reason why is that you can drink beer as you are on the beach,you can relax yourself.In addition,there are many charming girls ,maybe you can meet your mr.right .Besides,there must be cool in sea in summer.In the night ,you can enjoy the performance in the beach,so you can also dance with the actor