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My hometown I like my family ,i like my hometown.i will took adout my hometown get together with you. Long long ago, my hometown was a small country,but it very beauty.It not only have a clean river but also it was planted lots of flowers and trees.Even if,it was a bad face,such as poor,low life level. Up to now, Technology chance the badly condition .Some buildings are built which mark this country shift become a big city,The car are filled with the road as well as the crowd are crowded into kinds of supermarket.So the industry make progress that the environmental Science dirtier and dirtier.More and more tree and fish are reducing.So, we will keep free the environmental Science from indusry be destruction.