2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(27):提示写文

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的错误，可适当增加从句的使用；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Let me arrange an one-day trip in Beijing for David. There are two palce we'd like to go to, one is the Great Wall, the other is Ding Royal Tomb, and both of the above two are on the northern side of Beijing city. I would explain the stories happened in Chinese history, around the Great Wall and Ding Royal Tomb as well, which, I think, must be an attractive tour to Mr.David.