2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(27):提示写文

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Let me arrange an one-day trip in Beijing for David. There are two places we'd like to go to, one is the Great Wall, the other is Ding Royal Tomb, and both of the above two are on the northern side of Beijing city. I would tell him the stories happened in Chinese history, around the Great Wall and Ding Royal Tomb as well. you can be sure that, it must be an appealing tour to Mr.David.