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Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel! Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. It's only 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan, with trees around. It offers two kinds of boarding, one is a single room at a price of 100 yuan one night, the other is a double room 150 yuan one night. There are totally 35 rooms in hotel, among which 20 rooms are for single rooms. Baishan Mountain Hotel provides food service. You can choose any one from below: Chinese food, western style food or Bafei like having tea or coffee. The swimming pool is open 24 hours a day for free. It will be appreciated if you like to book a room here.
