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2008年高考英语作文真题附范文(四川卷):保护环境

发布时间:2013-05-26 11:07浏览次数:749
要求:

你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报,主题为:保护环境从我做起。请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。


注意:
1.词数100左右,开关语已为你写好;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
What can I do for our environment? 
Everyone can do something for our environment. ________________________________  
用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

As we all know,the environment is very important for us.But with the development of China, the population is larger and larger.It causes many kinds of pollution.The earth is our home,we should protect it. Everyone can do something for our environment. First,we should walk or ride bikes to school instead of taking our father's car,because we need the fresh air.Second,in order to protect the forest,we are supposed to recycle the old newspaper。Then,we'd better turn off the electric appliance when we go out.Finally,we have to save the fresh water.We should collect the used water to water the flowers. If we do so,I strongly believe we will see the blue sky,smell the sweet flowers and drink the fresh water again.Try our best to protect the environment together.

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