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Don't leave kids behind. According to incomplete statistics, there are more than 22 million of rural children throughout the country, who was left at home with relatives while their parents work in urban areas. How sad the above rural children are. Due to the lack of daily careness from their parents, they are easy to be self-closed as no one available will be right and ready to listen to them, and to be a drop-out from their class because nobody gives them courage. what is more, the mentle problems will occur if a childhas been left lonely for too long time. When he cries, nobody listens to; when he suffers, nobody help him get through the troubles. Above all, the most afflicting point is lay in their safeness. For example, the summer in 2005 witnessed a desarster in Village Zuowan,Lianyuan County, Hunan Province. There were 12 persons derived of their life in the mountain rainstorms, among which, 11 were children who were left alone from their parents. It's hightme now we should do something in overcoming this social problem. Each child must be brought up together with his or her mother and father in China.
