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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17583
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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Every day even every second we may need to make a decision. In fact, life is just full of various choices and decisions. Sometimes the time is limited, so many people decide to do things without enough thinking. So there comes a question :Whether a snap judgment can be trusted. For me, I firmly believe that snap judgment can never be trusted. The reason is pretty simple. If we think of something without deliberate thinking, where is the difference between other creatures and us? In order to understand it more clearly, let's have a look at the value of history. As we all know, history are helpful for us to understand the world and predict the future because things have its inner law. If we keep observing and summarizing, we can better know what is the circumstance now and which event was similar to it and at last we can know how to solve it. This also goes for making a decision. If we do not think about a problem comprehensively and analysis from data in the past and our experience, we are like an ignorant baby doing everything without enough thinking. Pretty dangerous isn't it? In a word, those snap judgments should never be trusted. To do things better, please look before you leap.

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