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Don't leave kids behind. According to incomplete statistics, there are more than 22 million of rural children throughout the country, who was left at home with relatives while their parents work in urban areas. How sad the above rural children are. Due to the lack of daily care from their parents, they are easy to be self-closed as no one available will be ready to listen to them, and to be a drop-out from their class because nobody gives them courage. What is more, the mentle problems will occur if a child has been left lonely for too a long time. When he cries, nobody hears; when he suffers, nobody helps him get through the troubles. Above all, the most afflicting point lies in their personal safeness when in a crysis. For example, the summer in 2005 witnessed a disaster in Village Zuowan,Lianyuan County, Hunan Province. There were 12 persons deprived of their life by the mountain rainstorms, among which, 11 were just the children who were separated away from their parents. It's hightime now we should do something in overcoming this social problem. Each child has to be brought up together with his or her mother and father in China.
