2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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dear friend 。welcome to my hometown Wuhan .It is a very niece place.There has many sight let you feel pleasant 。 for example Huanghelou is famous in Chine 。 it near from Yangzhi river。 if you come to the top，you will see Yangzi river。it is amazing。you could visit wuhan university 。it has long time history