2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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We all knows that Online Shopping has became more and more fashion and popular in our daily life. There has two side about online shopping . On one hand .many people like the style of Online Shopping because which is convinient .we may have all kinds of chose and we can chose the best and cheapest on internet.But on the hand .there is also some questions about Online Shopping ,sometimes ,we may be cheated and the thhings may not like what we wanted. From the point of my view,i think Online Shoping is very convinite,althought which is popular but we should be cautions on the internet.