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拼写方面做得很棒，平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段。
Recently there are more and more phenomena which ignore the study of Chinese.Why so many situations like these happen around us? The reasons are as follows: First of all, plenty of students catch up with the aboard. They run after with them and consider that all the things about the west are the best. So our Chinese students lost their own value. Furthermore, global culture becomes a hot issue. Our government thinks highly of the study of the western knowledge. They continue to study from others' culture. However, this leads to the bad results which they forget their own culture gradually. What's worse, the soft strength of our country gets worse and worse. Other states will attempts to aggressive ours. Then the bad consequence will beyond our imagine. From my perspective, it's our basic duty to put more attention on our native study. We should concentrate on our study. Otherwise, it's good for us to enhance our native soft strength by learning from others.
