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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第47篇:好室友是什么样的?

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:51浏览次数:2195
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作文题目:

Colleagues are the people who work with us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good colleague?

Use specific details and examples in your answer.

室友是跟我们一起生活的那个人。依你看,好室友是什么样的?给出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

There is a common sense that the four-years campus time is one of the most not only important but also happy time among our life.During that time you will learn how to cooperate and get along well with each other.Thus it is very significant to live with a good colleague. From my views,there are so many requirements for a good colleague as follows.First of all,he/she should be a good student who studies hard with ambitions and positive attitude.Besides,because we are building our sense of value during that time we must live with someone has good living habits for example he/she doesn't smoke or drinking and so forth.At last not least,all of us prefer to get along with somebody who has a good character.

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