小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is a kind girl. She is a school girl . My friend like playing football ,playing piano and so on.She likes eating hot pot, ice-cream and vegetables,either. She is a good student .She often helps my homework all the time . I have a useful friend very happy.