邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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how to improve school safety Nowdays,we pay more attention on school safety.Frightened by the case that students were fighted,we must find useful methods to solve this problem. In my opinion ,we can do the following ways.First,improving security guards' ability is a useful way.Scecondly,students should protect themselves from injury if them face dangerous.Lastly,the local government had better let policemen guard the campus.