2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays ,there are exist a hot topic about computer and man ,someone said the computer will instead of the man in short future ,because the man more and more reliance on the computer , but others said the computer will never over beyong the man in future, because the man can do some difficult thing but the computer will never can do it . As far as i'm concerned,I also think the man will be never take the place of by the computer .there are some reasons about my ideals ,At first , the man have emotion ,they can express their feels .but the computer are not do it .Second ,the man have their ideal ,and the computer will never control of the man .and the last but for all ,the man have their potential ,and they can creating more and more useful thing,so i think the computer will never instead of the man