2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文中拼写错误比较多，同时请注意积累词汇量；请注意分段。

it is to put all eggs in one basket is like to put you all enegy in one thing, It's unwise .somebody will put you all potential to one thing, For example, As college student many student tend to take their enegy to study rather than to all-round development, I not to said college student can't spend time in their study ,I just to said college student should take apart in more and more activities to enrich thier college life .