单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;使用了简单的从句;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
English is very important to us .English is used in many different country in the word .pass the English we can introduce our country to word and study the technology of the developed country . make more batter serve for the our country.addition .it is an very interesting thing to study English .