2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂，需要多使用一些学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

It is to put all eggs in one basket is like to put you all energy in one thing,It's unwise.Somebody will put you all potential to one thing,For example,As college student many student tend to take their energy to study rather than to all-round development,I not to said college student can't spend time in their study,I just to said college student should take apart in more and more activities to enrich their college life . So,I think this action is unwise that put all eggs in one basket.If you want to take best advantege of your energy,you had better organize an outline,you can do something or you can't do something,It will be very worthy of your life,And you will get best interest to use your time . Let's to enjoy it together what it can be made our life more and more colourful.