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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10404
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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It is to put all eggs in one basket is like to put you all energy in one thing,It's unwise.Somebody will put you all potential to one thing,For example,As college student many student tend to take their energy to study rather than to all-round development,I not to say college student can't spend time in their study,I just to say college student should take apart in more and more activities to enrich their college life . So,I think this action that put all eggs in one basket is unwise.If you want to take best advantage of your energy,you had better organize an outline,you can do something or you can't do something,It will be very worthy of your life,And you will get best interest to use your time . Let's to enjoy it together what it can be made our life more and more colourful.Come on!We can do it.

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