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It is to put all eggs in one basket is like to put you all energy in one thing,It's unwise.Somebody will put you all potential to one thing,For example,As a student, Many students tend to take their energy to study rather than to all-round development,I not to say college students can't spend time in their study,I just to say college students should take apart in more and more activities to enrich their college life . So,I think this action that put all eggs in one basket is unwise.If you want to take best advantage of your energy,you had better draw an outline,you can do something or you can't do something,It will be very worthy of your life,And you will get best interest to use your time . Let's to enjoy it together what it can be made our life more and more colourful.Come on!We can do it.
