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Football,it is my favorite sport,it also my biggest hobby.I love playing football because of one by chance。One day,on my way home,I found a football,then I play it with my friends .Since then I am deeply fall in love with it。 From then on,I always training and competition with my friends.The football super star who I like best is David Beckham who born in England. My biggest wish is that I can become a professional football player.please good luck to me.