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从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
My favourite school life My school life has changed a lot since this term. We don’t need to get to school early. We begin our lessons at eight o’clock. We can get enough sleep. At school we have at least one hour for sports to relax ourselves every day. After the second class we do morning exercises. After that we usually kick jianzi or skip rope. In the afternoon, we can do different kinds of sports. Some play basketball, some play football, others run on the playground. After school, we don’t have too much homework to do. We have lots of free time. We can do what we like . We can take part in many after-school activities. In a word, we are happier and healthier than before.
