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Along with the development of education, university ranking has witnessed becoming increasingly popular. As to the phenomenon, people’s opinions vary from person to person. On the one hand, many people assert that the university ranking affect deeply in life. They think the university ranking represent whether the school is suitable or unfavorable. On the other hand, some people hold a different point. They claim that the university ranking is useless even harmful. It just reflects the number, not telling the strength of the university. In this case, it may lead to the poor influence. When it comes to university ranking, many people assert it is good for us, which can offer us the information to choose the school. As far as I am concerned, I don't agree with it. Otherwise, I firmly applaud the second point. It is wonderful that the university has the high quality education no matter it is added the low-ranking order.
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