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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
As far as I am concerned,perchasing things in a sale saves a lot money as a student,however,the chances are very few.So we can not always buying thing for sale ,or our demands are hard to be satisfied. As summer was around the corner ,I had to change my bedings and get a fan to cover the hot days,thereas it was too expensive for me to buy.So I decided not to buy these days which became the hardest days for it was too hot to fall asleep.The following day without sufficient sleep, made me dizzy all day. Above all,we should buy things acorrding our needs instead of the price,or we will have some unconveniences in our daily life,wihch is hard to endure.
