作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
My hometown My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. It used to be beautiful.There were many trees stood around the houses.The rivers were clean and there lived a lot of fish.People lived in small houses and had a hard life.They were poor but friendly to nature. However,people now have richer lives than before and the nature is getting worse and worse.Tall buildings are standing up,cars filled the streets.More and more factories pollute the air.The trees are cut down and fish disappeared in the rivers.Luckily,more and more people realize that it is time to act immediately.We ought to protect our environment from now on.