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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22902
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。

用户练习作文:

My hometown My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. It used to be beautiful.There were many trees stood around the houses.The rivers were clean and there lived a lot of fish.People lived in small houses and had a hard life.They were poor but friendly to nature. However,people now have richer lives than before and the nature is getting worse and worse.Tall buildings are standing up,cars filled the streets.More and more factories pollute the air.The trees are cut down and fish disappeared in the rivers.Luckily,more and more people realize that it is time to act immediately.We ought to protect our environment from now on.

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