小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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The boy name is Liu Yun。The boy is my best friend。My friend is very quite。 He is a boy。 He good in class。He play basketball very well。He likes singing。 On Sunday。 He and I often goes shopping. I'm play computer with he. He home is very beautiful. This is my friend. He is very good, isn't he?