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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Environment It was a wonderful world before. We could see the trees were tall, the sky was blue, the air was fresh, and the water was clean. The people there were friendly. What a wonderful world have I seen! However, it was the past. You can only see it on pictures .Now, let’s see, many mountains which used to wear green now become bald .And it is always reported that the oil spill and sewage discharged has destroyed the water. Maybe we can still raise our head and see the blue sky, use our nose breathe in the fresh and clear air .But what about the other places? We can always see that there are many serious air pollutions in the other places from the news. The smoke, the PM2.5,and the fog and haze .I’ve heard about that there was a country once produced too much Industrial exhaust,and polluted the air ,then the people there used some machines and the natural wind blew away the pollution. Guess what? The pollution entered the other country and the people there trigger serious respiratory problems. Of course, the main culprit was arrested finally. But this has just taught us that our world is a big house, if there is an air or water pollution it might be a global problem. So it’s all the humans’ duty to protect our environment!
