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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22894
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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文中词汇使用较丰富,学术词汇使用要加强;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

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Global talent In my opinion, the global talent is a type of people who have wide knowledge, self-resteem and great mind. As for the generation today,we have more and more things to learn.For example, the history which used to have a little now is including more than 5000years’ history.So we need to learn more than the people before.We should not only learn our past and also learn for recent information.Go as the world goes.Try your best to pay attention to the the latest news. Also in this world,especially the closer you get into the society,the more great and talent people you will meet.Maybe you will feel bad when you meet those people and become nagetive,but try not to lose yourself.On the one hand you should believe that you are the best and you won’t be failed in front of any problems if you try your best.On the other hand you should face your life bravely and realize how serious and unfair it will be.I mean sometimes you should have the prepare for the worst situation.As you doing this you’d better learn from those great and talent people first,because you should know the distance between you and them .And improve yourself from learning. That is a part of my opinion,if you have any other new and nice ideas please come and discuss with me. I’ll be happy to talk with you.

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