文中词汇使用较丰富,学术词汇使用要加强;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
Global talent In my opinion, the global talent is a type of people who have wide knowledge, self-resteem and great mind. As for the generation today,we have more and more things to learn.For example, the history which used to have a little now is including more than 5000years’ history.So we need to learn more than the people before.We should not only learn our past and also learn for recent information.Go as the world goes.Try your best to pay attention to the the latest news. Also in this world,especially the closer you get into the society,the more great and talent people you will meet.Maybe you will feel bad when you meet those people and become nagetive,but try not to lose yourself.On the one hand you should believe that you are the best and you won’t be failed in front of any problems if you try your best.On the other hand you should face your life bravely and realize how serious and unfair it will be.I mean sometimes you should have the prepare for the worst situation.As you doing this you’d better learn from those great and talent people first,because you should know the distance between you and them .And improve yourself from learning. That is a part of my opinion,if you have any other new and nice ideas please come and discuss with me. I’ll be happy to talk with you.