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Draw a conclusion immediately just base on what you are hear and listen is not witted. when we attend high school ,we learned the lesson called politician ,which tells us that in any case ,we should resist the fraud phenomenon and use the clues it provides us to find the truth behind it . recently ,a airplane was crashed in the territory of Ukraine ,all the world were shocked and spare no effort to find The reason of the crash .at that moment ,the relative countis are trying to show that they were innocent ,as a citizen ,just base on what we are hear and watch from the Internet ,we couldn't figure out the truth ,if we draw a conclusion just rely on the unreliable information we get everyday ,that`s undoubtedly ridiculous . beside ,resarchers should take this concept seriously too ,because every influential found is base on thousands of experiments ,instead just one
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