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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
To be honest,I am so happy to introduce my hometown for my foreign friend.I remember this is a river what I want to say. When I am a child,I often played around the river,you can not imagine how much it has given to me.Especially,in the summer,I could swim,fish catch many small animals.It has become my happiest memory.Second teh water is so clearly that you can see the fishes easily,Try to think how comfortable it is.Gradually I have grown up,it is a long time that I have not see that river,I,really ,want to see the river again by the way. AS matter as I am concerned,everyone always think that their hometown are the best ,Because it is full of their unforgettable memory.
