我喜欢英语,我想在10年以后当一位英语老师。我要尽可能教好我的学生。我要尽量用英语讲课。我要努力使我的课讲得生动有趣。
另外,学生们都喜欢听老师讲故事,所以我要经常给学生讲英语故事,使他们对英语感兴趣,从而能提高他们的听力。我相信我能成为一个好老师的。
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I like English,SO I intend I will as an English teacher after 10 years.I want to teach my students as much as possible,I want to try to lecture in English,I try to make my lessons lively and interesting, on the side,All the student like to listen to the teather telling stories,So I will often give students speak English story, To make them interested to English,To improve their listening comprehension,I believe I can become a good teacher