我喜欢英语,我想在10年以后当一位英语老师。我要尽可能教好我的学生。我要尽量用英语讲课。我要努力使我的课讲得生动有趣。
另外,学生们都喜欢听老师讲故事,所以我要经常给学生讲英语故事,使他们对英语感兴趣,从而能提高他们的听力。我相信我能成为一个好老师的。
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I like English,SO I intend I will as an English teacher after 10 years.I want to teach my students as much as possible,I want to try to lecture in English, I try to make my lessons lively and interesting, on the side,All the student like to listen to the teather telling stories,So I will often give students speak English story, To make them interested to English,To improve their listening comprehension,I believe I can become a good teacher