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可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意。
When my friend is about to pay a visit to my hometown, I just want to take him to go hiking on the street . The street in YangLing is extremely different from that in other cities. its outstanding trademark is cosy and quiet. noise ,to some degree,does not dowell in this small town .The harmony between human and nature is our pride, which transcend the majority of cities in China,without too many manmade things ,in bid to follow the instinct of nature .The residents here are passionate and full of love to their ordinary but ample lives, which you can see from their leisure steps . Walking on the street ,you can also embrace the modern agricuitural city that has accomplished so many mircles about human-nature relationship.seeing all the building ,trees,and even the slightest things here ,perhaps you will acknowledge that human is not the protagonist in my hometown ,while the nature is.
