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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
When my friend is about to pay a visit to my hometown, I just want to take him to go hiking on the street. The street in YangLing is extremely different from that in other cities. its outstanding feature is cosy and quiet. Noise,to some degree,does not dowell in this small town.The harmony between human and nature is our pride, which transcends the majority of cities in China,without too many man-made things,in bid to follow the instinct of nature.The residents here are passionate and full of love to their ordinary but abundant lives, which you can see from their leisure steps . Walking on the street ,you can also embrace the modern agricultural city that has accomplished so many miracles about human-nature relationship.seeing all the building ,trees,and even the slightest things here ,perhaps you will acknowledge that human is not the protagonist in my hometown ,while the nature is.
