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My friend names is Chen xiaobo,he is a reporter,he is wooking at yunnan newspaper office Our know already 14years. Our all understand temperament each other Sometime.us Also idea is diffract each other,but does not affect learning. He has a son and very clever,I very like him.I often buy some food for him