高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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There are many green trees around my hometown, many fish are swanning in the clearly river , the house is sample , the streets and streets are very close, but there full warn inside . People work and life are very easy and poor. It is a very beatufull hometown. But now , many big bulitting and company inside ,many kind of car aross from here, the air is most bad that before, and the trees less more than before, and the fish are disples. So, the important and hurry to clear the air and water.