作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;过程性词汇偏少;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段。
Last week, I and co-worker quarreled because of a little thing ,I feel so sad ,but I don't mind it .maybe I must do better,in fact ,the God send it to ordeal me,it's the life of expence. I will try to learn to my important thing .who care they talk about .study to learn that I want it